And he still dies.
Very good first submission! Kinda sucks that he dodges bullets from point blank only to go splat on the sidewalk. :( Oh well!
And he still dies.
Very good first submission! Kinda sucks that he dodges bullets from point blank only to go splat on the sidewalk. :( Oh well!
pretty good
it is good for ur first submission
ok ??
Kind of good but needs improvement.
In what aspect?
Wow
was this ur first cuz its really good? but why was the cigarette butt lit?
Not bad
Nt bad for your first. i some what like it