Nice flash
The animations were a bit crude, but i loved the car, i just think it was drawn perfectly. Anyways, the beginning was booooring, and too long, so you could've cut it. I gave this a 8/10 and 3/5, because the car was sooo nice :P
Reviews for "The_Weekend"
Wow
was this ur first cuz its really good? but why was the cigarette butt lit?
And he still dies.
Very good first submission! Kinda sucks that he dodges bullets from point blank only to go splat on the sidewalk. :( Oh well!
Nicely done
This was so well done and it a lot of effort put into it.
It'd get you a great mark, but...
...it's kind of ugly to look at. You demonstrate some solid Flash skills, and I'd mark you high as a teacher/assessor, but it lacks the polish of a high-scoring NewGrounds submission.
Lots of potential, and a good start, but you still have a ways to go in refining your art. Things like disappearing text on buildings, cars driving over elements of a background they should be driving under, etc. really take away from what is a solid little narrative.
brokenfridgehinge responds:
Thank you for your feedback, I am still learning flash and all the drawing tools so my next submission should look more polished than this one.