ok, just wut happened?
te animeshun wuz gud, just hard to undrstand
Reviews for "Wither"
not bad
Very cool to see some traditional animation. It looked very choppy though. Cleaning the lines up in your pictures is another thing, which is not necessarily needed because it gives style. But the frame rate and flow could be way better. I know that takes allot of work and who wants to go through all that when you already have the basic animation done?? Well thats the price to pay for quality animation. (and a better rating.) Needs a better, smoother frame rate. Its good work! but you can do better.
well, I'll be honest
No that bad but not that good either...I had trouble identifying the storyline...and the choppyness was a little more excessive than it should be. good job though.
Twitches a little.
The animation was kinda cool, the 'out of the pages' style has been done, but I still like. But that song kinda killed it for me. I'm not sure if it was just the compression or what, but...ow. Hurt my ears a bit. Keep up the effort.
My other one was too short.
Way too jumpy for my taste. The art was good, but nothing new or spectacular to me. I would recommend a different way of doing animation if you're gonna stick with shorts for newgrounds.