Nice
Nice stuff
Reviews for "Wither"
You're good, but this flash was not so good
Clearly you can draw very well seeing as you have great perspectives and a consistent look. The animation, however, seemed to be lacking frames or was moving along to fast, making it look choppy and a tad rushed. This also made it a bit hard to follow along with what was happening in the flash and thus I feel like I might have missed something.
Nice work, none-the-less.
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Looked great, unfortunately I couldn't watch it since it was sort of a "load as you go" deal. The drawings looked great but it would stop every 5 seconds or so and just sit there until it loaded the next 20 frames or whatever. I guess no one else had this problem, but it would've worked better (for me) if you made it so it loaded everything first.
Anyway, looked great, I'll have to try again when my connection is faster and the site is less crowded. Cheers.
Meh
It was kind of cool. I dont really think I quite grasped a plot... if there was one. But it was still fairly cool.
preloader?
I can see your a good artist, and I know that your style of animation is very tedious, but thats something you have to be prepared for. In your animation you had few frames per second which I found made the clip hard to comprehend. Also there was no preloader, this means that only people with the highest internet can watch it. I only got about half way through until it cut out. If you dont know how to make a preloader, you should either google it :P or just have the first x amount of frames blank.
Dont get me wrong; I do think your a great artist and your work is amazing, I'm just trying to give you healthy critisizm.