A for effort, B for results
It was interesting, but very choppy and hard to follow. Kinda hurt my eyes, actually. It also was lacking in any define plot, but I guess that was kinda the point.
I would suggest a higher frame rate, but I know how hard that is to do with paper drawings.
Good effort, though.
VERY NICE
Its artowrk its original and awesome, but it demosntrates no particular FLASH knowledge. for example no preloader.
ok, just wut happened?
te animeshun wuz gud, just hard to undrstand
pretty good..
basically it looks great you got the anatomy pretty good,
the frame setup is pretty awesome too..
but the few frames where it gets dark kinda ruins the animation and takes away all the dynamic it could've-..
overall looks total awesome ^^
paper tweak
honestly, it wasn't superb.
the animation was fairly sloppy. try using onion skinning next time or draw frames borders while you animate- and definitely use a better camera (better yet, a scanner) with CONSISTENT lighting on each exposure. the inconsistent twitchy flashing of all the frames was very painful to watch, even though some of the transitions were good. nice use of tweens and fbf, but like I said keep the lighting the same on each frame
the audio choice was not very pleasant, neither was the compression. try making some original music to accompany a video
cheers for the effort though. I always enjoy watching an old-school style fbf animation.
keep it up