Nice!
Pretty Nice song, I like it but the part at the front is a little too long. If you made it short by a few seconds it would've been a little better. Other than that this is a real nice piece!
Reviews for "Daylight Train Crossing"
Yodamanjaro responds:
thanks for the review man
Awesomee:D
This made it to my mp3 player!=D
Yodamanjaro responds:
Awesome.
Dude I still remember when i heard Before Midnight
the remix i mean haha. Well not quite in the mood for a review, though i must say, Yes, the simple songs are quite often remembered. though i have to say i really don't like kiss fm, and those songs are simple and in turn remembered haha. But really, simple songs = win. Usually. Complex songs... = mind blow win but take a long time to make and... sometimes just have some minor fault that makes them not a win. Downloaded this song a while ago, and the concept of the train bell sound and side chain does feel like a train xD. hum... i do wish the piano would have some.. stronger variation. When it first comes in, the piano is playing one note each measure like whole notes, and then a few sprinkles of notes are added in occasionally, until 1:46. Replaying the exact melody of the piano when it was playing whole notes, I find that it follows the same exact structure. I don't find that as a huge problem, and listeners probably don't either, though I sort of wish that you could change that structure of that piano melody a little bit. Like as I hear it, as four measures progress, the melody has this sort of feeling of descending along the piano. Every once in a while if you could throw in the piano ascending as the four measures come to the end, I think that could add a nice little touch to the song. Perhaps making the melody part into insane triad chords could work and sound nice? :D? though that would not really be ideal to play anymore. Really there's no problem with it, and i find from my own experience that expanding upon the whole note melody kind of idea into the main melody to be a very powerful way to generate melodies. And you could come up with a great melody in your head too, then break it down like you're working backwards from the middle of a song to the beginning.
Overall I really liked the feeling of this song :). Simplicity at its best here :D
-AXT 10/10 5/5 Downlaoded. I guess I did review it, eh? haha
Yodamanjaro responds:
haha yeah you did, you reviewed the crap out of it. Sad to say that I won't be making any further changes to this, I started to but I've come to accept this version as the last of it. I appreciate the thoughts though, wasn't a terrible idea you had with the piano.
Again, it's simple. That's the way I'd like to keep it too.
Sweet!
I love this song in Symphonic TD, and even just the song in general is awesome!
Yodamanjaro responds:
Thanks!
Wow! It still sounds awesome!
Nice pad sound. VST and preset names, pls? :3