good job
but many of the subtitles were innacurate, and some material was poorly written.
i suggest you write subtitles based on waht the voice actors say, insterad of waht the scrip says.
Reviews for "Ragnarok Online D.P. Ep.1"
Nicely done.
When I realized you were going to use the circle hand-no arm style, I was a little dissapointed. But, it was far better than I expected it to be.
There are some things I want to point out though. First off, you had some horrible grammar near the start of the movie, and later on--when the girl kept yelling 'Hi-ya!', or whatever, that was kind of annoying. Even consitering that, the voice acting was pretty good.
The graphics were okay, during the fight scene at the end, when the girl used the crazy move that made here some kind of orange axe, and she was fighting the assassin, it looked really good.
I disslike how the main characters were so young though. 14 year olds don't save the world. 17-19 year olds do.
This was well done. I'll rate it a 4.
Great flash but major flaw...
You have loads of spelling and grammar mistakes! I know this doesn't seem like a big deal but it really makes the difference between the truly great flashes and the just ok ones...
It's = it is
Its = possesive of it
Nice job though
Pretty damn good
I really liked the fight scenes, and how you drew the characters.
The grammar wasn't THAT bad, but it could use improvement.
The voice acting is what really got to me. Simply put, it was horrible. You should try to improve on that next time.
Umm
Bad voice acting and why are their eyes so fucking huge lol