wow
hmm let me see i would give you a higher score but i found just alot of things to be your going good with the music but something big is missing and i can't find out once i just can't seem to put my finger on it.
But hey maybe you will get it next time don't give up
0_o er...ok XD i didnt understand what problem you did point out but ill try to make it better <.<
and dont worry i wont give up
thanks for the review XD
Great!
Storyline is great, just work on your drawing skills a bit and smooth up the characters.
Umm
Bad voice acting and why are their eyes so fucking huge lol
Ehh...
Kind of liked it =\
The beginning felt much too dragged out and long for just what could be a short introduction. It was boring.
The grachics annoyed me, at first I couldn't even tell if they had arms because they were so small and unattached to the body. Oval eyes were creepy too. A lot of parts were extremely 'zoomed in' so it was hard to actually know what you were seeing (especially in the beginning). The other graphics were better (the moon was nice).
I hated Shiro's, the merchant, and the merchant's dad's voices too. The name 'Angely Hevens' is way too unoriginal for my tastes as well.
I did however like the ending fight, even if I did think the female assassin wasn't doing enough in it.
Hope you continue, and improve your graphics (grammar and spelling needs work too) along the way.
nice
Love it. Can't wait for episode 2. All I can say ^_^