Good story
It was a very good movie whit a good story the character were also good a great movie.
Reviews for "Ragnarok Online D.P. Ep.1"
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There were a few grammatical errors. The tombstone on the fathers grave said he was a merchant but earlier it was said he was a woodsman; it seemed a bit unclear. I’ve played Ragnarok- I thought it was amusing that you used this as the subject. Overall, good work
Xionico responds:
0.o|| when i said he was a woodman? he was just recollecting wood, anyone can do that XD
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merchant --> blacksmith --> white/mastersmith
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What bugged me a lot aand make you go from a 10 to an 7.5 is the fact that you used the kind of body you used, and those.... weird.... eyes.. it was kinda scary. Anyways, it was great, always love ragnarok.
i dont have anything against this but
the grammar in it was kinda messed up...the korean trans for some of them were messed up and you need to learn how to say those town and item names right, sry ive been playing ragnarok for so long and its just one of those things that annoy me wen a person says somthing like that wrong X-x...and i dont think cart revolution should be wen u throw ur cart its more like as the description says the merchant swings the cart around and hits the enemy
and wat the heck man, you HAD to hit a poring?! wats wrong with u are u a poring hater? grr lol im just playing around
great flash ill give it a 4 keep workin on it
Xionico responds:
lol ya. I planned that koreand thingy when i saw an translator and made the first one, but then i remembered that translators are evil and i decided not to do it, but i forgot to remove the first one XD
and ya, plol ya. I planned that koreand thingy when i saw an translator and made the first one, but then i remembered that translators are evil and i decided not to do it, but i forgot to remove the first one XD
Cool concept but I couldn't understand something..
Why were their eyes so big! It's a cool that someone has finally made a flash about Ragnarok on Newgrounds and all, but please make the eyes a tad smaller in your next flash. I mean they're so big that I wonder how dust doesn't get stuck in them or something.
Xionico responds:
coff coff its my style, allright?
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