iyaaaaaaaahhhh!!!!!!!
really makes u think....... i hate the guy below me
Reviews for "Ragnarok Online D.P. Ep.1"
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Ragnarok sucks......
Xionico responds:
lol
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You should've got the 2d Sprite characters off the real ragnarok and the actual 3d background then make the 2d characters move around just like the real ragnarok and the voice was really crappy.
Xionico responds:
what for? i dont work with sprites in my main works, this is my style, and if you want to see the sprites, then play the game =)
MAN!
Graphics: 7
The fact that the eyes creeped me out and they had no limbs lowered the score abit, seriously work on the eyes... make em smaller, when there that big it's just creepy...
Style: 7
Done in Ragnarok style so to speak and made me chuckle a few times with the cart in the fight and all.
Sound: 5
The voices are my biggest gripe, our magely friend sounded bored and unintrested along with the priestess. The green haired girl just sounded really annoying and her HIYAAA was way to hi pitched for my taste. Music was okay though I'll give you that.
Viloence: 5
Wasn't to much till the ending fightscene but wow, you did really well with it, I wish I could skip straight to the fight scene since your colors used and fast paced animation was good, although the fight was insanely one sided.
Interactivity: 1
Um Play button and all that
Humor: 0
I don't think this was meant to be funny so I didn't laugh to much only chuckled whenever a poring (I think I spelt that right) popped up. By the way, when she tossed the cart, doesn't that mean they don't have any potions left...?
Overall: 6
Graphics and voices are the only things I can really truly complain on. Keep working on it and I have a feeling you'll have a great series soon! Looking forward to seeing changes (if any) in the next volume of your tale.
Don't Listen to the Naysayers...
This Flash actually has a LOT of potential, and though I have my fair share of complaints, I was actually pleased with this video's end result. First, i'll tell you my complaints:
1) The Graphics - I don't think you need to change the style you're animating the characters in, it's fine for this type of Flash. Ragnarok is a 2d Sprite game, I wouldn't expect someone to make an RO flash with full-blown, detailed animation. The big head and floating limb-style is fitting, but i wouldn't mine seeing the drawing cleaned up a bit more, y'know? Crisper images.
2) The Giant Eyes - Other people have commented on this and i will as well. Big, anime-esque eyes are fine, but tone them down just slightly (not much of a significant change).
3) The Voice Acting - Request voice-actors on the NG forums, you'll get back good, quality results. The parts that were slow (the flashback sequence) would've been less painful if the female voice actor was better and, overall, it will improve the atmosphere of your flash. Otherwise it just seems like a very amateurish production.
4) The Sub-titles - Not much needs to be said here. There were a lot of very distracting sub-titles. Get someone who is a native English speaker to review your script before you give it to the voice actors. If you don't, very serious moments in your film will fall to comedy. (I.E. The scene where the Assassin Cross is about to kill the female Merchant's father and says, "You let off your guard off!" That ruined the gravity of the situation.)
As for story, though a bit on the cliche side, I still think it's fine. My favorite part of this flash would have to be the attack spells/skills. I love how you executed them (very Sailormoon-esque)! When the Priestess shouted "Holy Light!" I got chills... keep up the good work and I hope to see a second (with improvements of course).