weak
Well done, you appealed directly to the kinder-goth market and won their shallow praise. This is infantile, it's full of plot holes and bad acting, bad animation, bad pronunciation and a very superficial attempt at being Tim Burton (which in it self, is a crime).
Perhaps itโs time to put away your Johnny the Homicidal maniac comics and actually consider the substance of your work.
Your animation technique needs much improvement; the characters conceptual design was lackluster, but they were made supernatural by your shoddy style.
I suppose the potential is there, you just need a good concept.