Pretty neat
This was actually interesting, but it could benefit from further episodes. As it is, as a single episode, without any hint of a further story, I'll say that the graphics and sound were decent, but without anything else to go on it's just a quick and neat flash... nothing more.
Still, great work.
decent
it's kinda neat if you plan on continuing on with it as a series or something
there was a bit of a glitch on the box when it spun around like it was supposed to be 3D. the side did not completely match up with the top, making it look as if the side of the box was coming off
Not quite right
1. Learn to spell, seriously, learn to spell and learn grammer, please
2. Clean up the graphics a little, they are a bit inconsistant at places
3. I don't know where else you can go with this, develope the plot more, you just unleashed pandora's box... ok... what now
Good job man
Goo animation man, but man it was really boring. Why not make an "entertaining" flash movie?? You have good flash skills, but you lack in imagination of a story.
That blue guy has got to be a pedofile or a canible.
meh
I dont thik it was very good. Good animation true. Cool stuff around the shop. I guess you are saving that secret room for a future episode but it was really annoying that you put it in when the little girl had no reaction to it. DIALOGUE!!!! terrible. Don't use words that you dont know the meaning of. "Don't stray around" that doesn't mean anything. He could say dont stray too far or just plain be careful of the dangerous stuff in the store. Or how about when he tells her to frisk the box? WTF1?! This submission really frustrated me. It also frustrated me that so many people thought it was the best thing they had seen on newgrounds...jeez what low expectations.
-IM OUT