Not quite right
1. Learn to spell, seriously, learn to spell and learn grammer, please
2. Clean up the graphics a little, they are a bit inconsistant at places
3. I don't know where else you can go with this, develope the plot more, you just unleashed pandora's box... ok... what now
meh
I dont thik it was very good. Good animation true. Cool stuff around the shop. I guess you are saving that secret room for a future episode but it was really annoying that you put it in when the little girl had no reaction to it. DIALOGUE!!!! terrible. Don't use words that you dont know the meaning of. "Don't stray around" that doesn't mean anything. He could say dont stray too far or just plain be careful of the dangerous stuff in the store. Or how about when he tells her to frisk the box? WTF1?! This submission really frustrated me. It also frustrated me that so many people thought it was the best thing they had seen on newgrounds...jeez what low expectations.
-IM OUT
I agree with the last submissions
Pretty much the basis of my enjoyment came from the graphical detail. The items in the shop were cool, and the animations flowed smoothly, even when trying to make them appear 3d. Other than that I'd say I didnt really like this movie. The sound was too hard to hear, I found myself reading the captions (which by the way I do appreciate). Anyways, keep up the work, and try to focus on these small suggestions in your later posts.
nice
this was very well done in a bit twisted way..
graphics9:well i couldn't have done better miself..
style7:no idea i was just random i guess.
sound6:no idea
violence1:because the girl get's sucked up and dies.. or does she?
interactivity1:for clicking play button-.-
humor2:by that weird looking cat.
Tho this was great.But...i wanted her to go to the door at the end of the shop i was hoping her to go there.
disapointing
this flash has very little meaning and the volume in the flash was too damn low. although the graphics was better than average