make more...
i really want to know what happens, the style needs some work though, and use less random big words... it makes it feel really dumb. Sludgmore is like a wierd carney... it's cool.
Reviews for "Intriguinglies"
Eh, good idea.
Let me begin with things I did like from this flash.
First off, I liked the concept of the "little shop of horrors" so to speak. I liked the animation, which would often cross over to 3D type camera panning shots. I found the art style to be unique and interesting. And I have always enjoyed a good dark story...
But I think this still needs a little work. If you were trying to go for a creepy atmosphere, then you didn't quite succeed. It was dark and ominous, but not creepy. Also, I hated the sound. I had to turn my speaker to max just to hear it. The music was bland, but I'll forgive it because it was just for background noise. The pacing of the flash was also a little too slow for my taste. Certain things, like pauses between lines of dialogue, felt overly drawn out. For example, the scene with the strange stone and the wrenches that came out of the ground could have been a few seconds shorter in my opinion. Also, I could tell that you were trying to make the shopkeeper sound intelligent by using fancy words, but much of his dialogue seemed a little... not fancy enough at times, or you used the wrong word for the situation.
Not to say this wasn't a good flash animation, however. It still had many good qualities going for it, many of which I said earlier in this review. I would like to see how the series turns out, should you choose to make it. All in all, good try and good luck in the future.
By the way... I need a cat like that.
Pretty neat
This was actually interesting, but it could benefit from further episodes. As it is, as a single episode, without any hint of a further story, I'll say that the graphics and sound were decent, but without anything else to go on it's just a quick and neat flash... nothing more.
Still, great work.
Pandoras box?
I liked this alot, and my only criticism is that the end was really predictable. Yes, make a series though.
decent
it's kinda neat if you plan on continuing on with it as a series or something
there was a bit of a glitch on the box when it spun around like it was supposed to be 3D. the side did not completely match up with the top, making it look as if the side of the box was coming off