ave seied it 3 tiems now but
i like ur animation there is 2 things weong 1 its too how should i put this lovey 2 the gay stuff that is just wrong but i liked the part where she threw off her bra and seid let ur boobies free i laffes so hard at that
Reviews for "Shinsetsu, Pas Ecchi"
Bomee responds:
hehe i dunno :)
that is quite funny, yes?
thankies, you are very kind and thoughtful :) *bows*
OK
There are OK graphics in this flash. Of course, I know how difficult it is to draw using a mouse on the computer. The animation, you are aware it isn't good. It's OK, but hopefully it can improve. The sound, meh, I didn't like it but it did match with the flash well. This flash, it didn't interest me much. Sorry. :| Some nice work anyway.
-Bahamut
Still not too keen on the story.
some selected aspects
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++ Some of the artwork is rather nicely drawn. You have good drawing skills.
+ I kinda like how it's all different styles.
++ For once, I could understand your story. Except for Seph. Was that just a random insert, or did she think her crush was Seph for a moment? That was kinda confusing...
-- When the snowball was being thrown, it was just too slow. There were other bits which I felt suffered from a similar problem.
- The story seemed a little insubstantial. I mean, it had a bit of comedy at the start (which made me half-smile) then a bit about the characters, then a yaoi thing for the fangirls. No exploration of the characters and the comedy was a bit lacking. It's really all about the naked dudes, isn't it?
overall
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Better than 'Andrea's heart' in pretty much every aspect. Seems like you're improving, so keep at it. Hope I've helped give you some pointers.
By the way what's with your pre-loader? The face looks like it's a button meant to link to your site or something, but clicking on it doesn't do anything.
Stay funky,
- Bez
Alright
Okay this was okay.
Before I comment on the movie I want to ask one question that will probably make me sound like an idiot. Is that a picture of you in your profile?
It is just funny cause usually all these anime flash girls usually look like dikes and things. But I guess you're an exception, and thats really good. Um....yeah.
Lol sorry for that.
Anyways get rid of your pre-loader and replace it with something better. Seriously something a bit simpler and not as messy. Also lose the girl with flying discs for the creator intro or whatever. That just looks bad.
This wasnt horrible. Your submissions are good and like you said it is hard to draw well with a mouse.
~I_F
okay
not good