Reviews for ArkAngel - Episode 1.1

[Draciel56]

potential..

I can see potential in this flash..but you seem to be missing some basic stuff. The big things I saw wrong about this were:

1. timing was REALLY bad. The guy stared at her for at least 30 seconds. I thought my computer was lagging or something.

2. animation could be better. Some parts in it show me that you can do alot better. Lay off the fades and (what seems like) lazy skipping..ish..stuff. If thats a style, I suggest you try out a different one.

3. The characters couldve been introduced a little better. The main problem I had was with the last dude. "go for her" we have no clue who this person is(i thought it was the principal? o_O) or how he knows whats going on with the kids life.

Well just work on those things..you should be fine. Try to make the next episode more interesting. I'll be looking forward to it.

[Renegade-Hamster]

Bah!

This was pretty annoying. Especially the bit where he just stares at the girl for ages. You could have made them move, just a bit, or maybe changed camera angles. Otherwise, it should have just been way shorter.

A lot of this was like a cheap anime with dumb American dubbing. The animation was minimal and unrealistic, the voice artists were over the top with their acting, and the story was annoying and childish.

I know that story-wise nothing much has happened yet, but I think you should have made this part of a bigger toon, or just left this part as backstory, to be told in the form of exposition in later episodes, author's comments, or otherwise. It was just too boring and I didn't find it entertaining at all.

Sorry.

2/5

[Deathlock]

Iffy

You do have some timing problems, and, especially with the preloader, it sounds and looks like it's gonna be a bad ripoff of Evangelion. I was really hoping for something original from you this time, or at least making a new flash from your DBZ Manga. (Which I love by the way)

Oh well, I'll give you a 3/5.

~HunterX57~

[Dmitri-Cassidy]

Not very good

It's been done before here on Newgrounds. The whole, anime high school and giant robots. I couldn't help notice the high school was named Verron. Which is the exact same school in the better flash movie series XIN. This is what your movie is, the little brother who acts like XIN and its brother cliche anime. Sorry, but, I'm not impressed.

Son-Finale responds:

"Verron" is intensional my friend, i'm good friends with life.1. My way of paying tribute.

[FoxFire42]

still have some work to do

granted it wasnt as bad as some stuff ive seen....but it was still pretty bad =/ the diolge was horrid and the sound just got anoying. i had to re watch it like 3 times because it kept freezing at one point. you have potiental...just keep at it.