good
well it was all good :)
except for the sounds :s
it was kinda weird xD lol
Reviews for "ArkAngel - Episode 1.1"
Seems alot like Evangelion
The whole beginning had the theme from the end of evangelion. I dont know if you ment to do that or not or if it was a quincedence. But the design of the girl who called the other girl a pervart was looked exactly like askua sohryu also from evangelion. Also at the start the head next to the girl looked ALOT like evangelion unit 1. And the long awkward pauses also was seen alot in evangelion. However no credit to the show was given so you couldve at least tried to come up with your own designs man. And dont bother responding by saying whats Evangelion cause I know youve seen it.
Lets Break it down...
Ok im gonna be critical so just bare with me. The graphics were above average, considering all the characters with the exception of the main character (which I honestly thought was a girl until he started talking) were either traced from or copied from Evangelion but hey Evangelion rocks so not really complaining too much there.
Sound wise it was ok. There were very few back ground sounds and those that you did have were pretty bad (example: the laughing students after the main character is tripped by the Asuka clone) However the voice acting especially that done by Kagome :) was exceptional so it makes up for the sound effects.
Finally I really hate to do this but being a writer myself I just cant let it slide, your script sucked. The lines for the characters were generic and boring (thank god the voice actors were good). I can understand that this is just the opening episode so things start off slow, but there really should be some kind of hook that will keep people interested so they will watch the next episode.
All in all it was pretty dang good but hey its Evangelion (the boring parts but still Eva) and Evangelion kicks butt.
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I like it but... i think you could do much more. You got a lot of talent, use it to the maximum. Overall good job there.
Not bad but....
after watching this it seems like the whole story was ripped off of Evangelion *Neon Genesis Evangelion* with some mild changes to the characters such as name and style cept for the guy that tells the main character to go for her who looks exactly like Kaji. Well the concept of it is okay I guess...but a lot of stuff was taken from Evangelion so atleast try to make the story somewhat different.