good
well it was all good :)
except for the sounds :s
it was kinda weird xD lol
Reviews for "ArkAngel - Episode 1.1"
Too Slow
That was actually really good, I was watching the preloader and thinkin yeah this is gonna kik ass, but then I saw it was just a bunch of drawing and some talking, a tiny bit of animation, and then just way to damned slow.
please at least make it go faster!
nice
one thing.... IT IS 2005 NOT 2006!!
u said 10 years ago in 1996 ....
anyway i liked it very much and make some more please!!
That is incredible!
I loved that! Just two things I think you could improve on: firstly, I think the synchronising of the sound needs a little work, and secondly, your spelling and grammar could be polished up, (eg. putting all the 'n's in "beginning" and working on the school sign. You might use "where an angel gets its wings", or "where angels get their wings").
However, I thought the silhouettes were phenomenal, and the story line really hooked me! I hope to see a lot more of this.
Decent
I enjoyed the artistic direction and I thought the animation was well done. I do have a few problems with this particular submission. As was stated in a previous review, you need to work on timing. It really threw everything off, especially when he was just staring at the girl. I thought my computer had frozen that scene took so long. Also, the story was boring. I realize this is something that will take time to come to fruition, but you have to give us something to make us really want to watch the remainder of this series. Overall, this is a pretty good submissions, and if you take care of a few flaws, it can be a great one.