Evangelion anyone ?
good start, the characters look like they came straight out of Evangelion.
Reviews for "ArkAngel - Episode 1.1"
It had potential...
...but in the end, there's just too much missing. As some of the other users mentioned, the pacing needs work. For example, the long stretch of dead air while the main character and the girl are staring at each other is a little *too* long.
You should also get someone to look over your dialogue. This is maybe the tenth movie I've seen with some variation on the "God is dead" line. And on a more urgent note, "poop-for-brains"? I thought these people were supposed to be high schoolers.
Artwise, most of the drawings look either referenced or traced. It's not a problem specific to you, and I suppose a lot of people won't mind either way, but it makes the movie look a little contrived.
Anyways, I know the review sounds harsh, but I really get the feeling you're trying too hard to imitate existing anime shows (I won't name names), rather than coming up with something really original. I mean, a classroom scene in which an introverted main character is disgraced? It's been done to death. My advice would be to sit back and try to think of something unique to yourself.
A good start...
Watch the pace. Sitting waiting for something to happen is not particularly entertaining. Looks like it could be the start of a great series.
still have some work to do
granted it wasnt as bad as some stuff ive seen....but it was still pretty bad =/ the diolge was horrid and the sound just got anoying. i had to re watch it like 3 times because it kept freezing at one point. you have potiental...just keep at it.
LOLLER
that was awesome...i cant wait till the next part. I DEAMAND MORE!!! *threatns with sharp pointy objects*
rating: 4 billion/5