NGE it ain't
Hohum another high school Anime wannabe, look, watch more Klamp and find out how to do it properly before boring us all to tears with tired clones, are you trying to redo Neon Gen. Evangelion?, sorry your 'shinj' is a <expletive deleted> and your Asuka needs a personality transplant... Look I don't mean to be cruel but I hope that subsequent episodes have more pace and less total, static silence for what felt like ten minutes, also try and put more smoothness into the mix, it is jerky and artificial seeming and with so many better Anime out there this is really poor - I applaud your attempt and do not wish to discourage you from trying harder in the future though, so good for you for trying but try harder in future - I shall look out for more of your efforts in the future