Reviews for Our First Halloween

[Frankiedaman]

Unimpressed

While I didn't really enjoy this flash - I will admit Joanime, that it is slightly better than your previous piece of work. Baring in mind your last work made no sense, this one has at least a mediocre plot.

Basically, what your trying to do here is please. Rather than come up with something original, you've taken cliche'd ideas from anime, stale jokes and yes, sexual innuendos in an attempt to please.

Your average braindead n00bish newgrounds user who is 13 or 14 has a specific niche that they enjoy - Hentai, Violence, and Sex jokes. You covered 2 of these 3.

Care to notice that a lot of the shorter, less irrelevant reviews are from 13 and 14 year olds who are voting straight 10s? Why? You've filled their desires, what they wanted to see, you provided. They vote 5 on submissions like this, and leave a poorly written review with straight 10s.

Also, like the reviews for your last submission, we have testosterone fuelled teens who think that if they vote 10, that they get cybersex off you. Well guys, Joanime is not interested - she's probably already taken - sorry to burst your bubble, you can put your penis away now.

Anyhow, there finishes my rant - I will look at each part of the flash.

Graphics : Your drawing is good, better than my artwork i'll admit. Very cliche'd anime style though. Nothing nobody has seen before. The way you animated this is VERY poor. No sign of frame by frame animation. Never EVER just rely on the tween command.

Style : Very cliche. Stuffed full of aspects i've already seen before. And let's not forget the "ecchi" scene.

Sound : You and Smiffy - your voice acting was ok. Flat at times, rather subpar - but hey, i'm not exactly the best voice actor, so I gave you some credit. Music choice for each scene was ok as well.

Violence : Kids get flour-bombed

Interactivity : Play / Replay Button

Humor : Very flat and overused ecchi jokes that get anime crazed 13/14 year olds in hysterics.

As I said before, slightly better than your last piece of work. But at a score of 4.23 - this spouts "Overrated" from every orifice. Not impressed overall =(

[Locked-Ghost]

heh.

I'm glad to see your smart enough to understand why your score is so high. All the 13 year olds probably want a piece of you right now. But that crap wont change my opinion.

This is just another overused anime-like tweenfest and it does not deserve the score is has gotten. So many good flashes on the top 50 earned there place up there, and you basically cheated your way to the top. Way to go.

Btw your boyfriend is an emo.

[AfroUnderscoreStud]

Is that it? It needed more to it.

It was too short and not much really happened in it and it also seemed a little too cliched and unoriginal, most of the stuff wasn't anything I haven't seen done hundreds of times before, there was some funny jokes in it but it never really got particularly interesting.

The start was good with Smiffy hiding and Jo making him come out and his costume was fairly funny to see, okay it wasn't an original joke at all, but it still worked and it was funny.

The next part with the Dustbin Fairy routine was fairly okay, it seemed a little corny but it definitely wasn't bad. Though the part after that where Jo fell marked the moment where this movie started to get boring, falling jokes are just overdone and they're very rarely ever funny.

The next part where the kids turn up at the door, Smiffy wasn't happy and he threw sugar over them, was just a part that's completely overdone, the effect it had when it was first done worked, but since then it's just been repeated over and over and the humour it once had is now completely gone. Then you used another overdone joke with the fat kid and having the bag fall on top of him just seemed far too over the top and it just didn't seem neccesary.

The next part was good, while it was again an overdone joke, it was an overdone joke that actually works apart from when it's done really badly, this wasn't done badly and it was great to see the reaction from the Christian woman due to what she thought was happening. The part where Jo opened the door could have been better though as it wasn't particularly interesting and the use of the tumbleweed made it far too cliched.

The next part was dissapointing, as you just suddenly decided to end it and not really all that much had happened in the movie, it would have been much better if you'd continued on from there and had some funny events taking place.

The whole movie did really seem to be lacking in events, it was just a couple of trick-or-treating mishapsalong with two other jokes, which just wasn't enough. The sound quality of the voices was poor and it really showed when the voices got louder and it showed far too much when the kids went 'trick or treat', the poor sound quality somewhat let the movie down and made it seem worse than it actually was.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[Romoy]

I wanted monsters not freaks in a costume..

I wanted monsters not freaks in a costume..If I wanted to see freaks in a costume I would look in the fucking mirror. More Monsters and gory stuff. Thats what halloween is and fucking up little kids..Dam bitches them..

----Brain---

[enchiladah]

Stupid

Just plain stupid. No plot, no story and the characters barely had any character at all. The Graphics were great, but that hardly makes up for it. I dont know why something this stupid is rated so high. I did get one laugh out of it, but overall it didn't move me one bit.