Quite good
I really liked it, I really liked how you even made a character for yourself now I dont know if your really like that but the inocent child hearted girl and the undying love for the guy and he is the hard overthinking tough guy who doesnt like childish stuff, its really quite a good plot if you think about it, though I could be completely wrong I have no doubt that you dont even read these so I am good =) anyway good work its very good I am expecting much more out of this =)