great
for a first this is awesome
Reviews for "A Short Litle Story"
It was ok!
For the first flash! It was really good. But, The sound... How could I explain this? The timing is pretty bad! The box falling make a sound but it still hasn't reach the ground yet! :P
Anyway, try working on your timing and I'm sure you'll get frontpage someday.!
Good Luck!
good job
This is good, especially for a first flash (or a first entry). I recommend using a fade in, fade out filter for your voice clips, it's too obvious where they come in and come out. Other than that, very nice job. :) Hope to see more.
Great work
Absolutely loved it! Cant wait for more :P
Keep up the effort!
Your style is really sweet. With more practice you'll be making some kick ass flashes.