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Reviews for "A Short Litle Story"

Huh?

I didn't get the point of this animation. The graphics were interesting, but the voice acting was pretty bad. It wasn't very funny either, the ending was just stupid and had no real point to it. However, I do like the style. I think it has potential.

Boring and without humor

The drawings used in this flash are... not horrible. Otherwise, this flash is not very good. The sound quality is poor, the boy's lines are uninspired, and the girl's are a barely audible stream of the f***ing this, f***ing that and f*** you-variety garbage. The attempt at synchronizing the voices with the mouth movements failed. The "joke" at the end is lame and possibly the worst aspect of this submission. With some effort, this could have been an entertaining joke; as it stands it is merely a boring collection of stale pictures and sound.

Funny!!!

At first i didn't think it was going to be funny but the end was Pretty funny..keep up the good work.

Short, not very sweet

Not too bad. Drawings are good, but the sound was too low and the swearing was not necessary.
Try a more tasteful short story next time.

2/5

meh

VERY short and random too, but the drawings were okay in this one.