good job
This is good, especially for a first flash (or a first entry). I recommend using a fade in, fade out filter for your voice clips, it's too obvious where they come in and come out. Other than that, very nice job. :) Hope to see more.
Reviews for "A Short Litle Story"
It was ok!
For the first flash! It was really good. But, The sound... How could I explain this? The timing is pretty bad! The box falling make a sound but it still hasn't reach the ground yet! :P
Anyway, try working on your timing and I'm sure you'll get frontpage someday.!
Good Luck!
great
for a first this is awesome
Short, not very sweet
Not too bad. Drawings are good, but the sound was too low and the swearing was not necessary.
Try a more tasteful short story next time.
2/5
Huh?
I didn't get the point of this animation. The graphics were interesting, but the voice acting was pretty bad. It wasn't very funny either, the ending was just stupid and had no real point to it. However, I do like the style. I think it has potential.