its pretty good
you can draw pretty good and the animation was smooth, its dam good for a first flash so therefore i have a small doubt that it is, but if you say so...
anyway great flash, you could make some awesome movies in the future
Reviews for "A Short Litle Story"
Wow
Honestly for your first flash this is top notch ^__^
You did a excellent job, thou the sound was low, when i turned it up it was funny ^__^
but all in all, you did great job for your first time, and You seem to have alot of talent, Who knows? you could have a great future here on newgrounds ^__^
good effert
for a first flash that was up near the top by my standards. The voices were soft but when i turned the volume up loud i found it quiet funny. As the last guy said the lip-sync was off but can be easily fixed
GOOD JOB!
YEAH!!!!!!!
Fucking hillarious thats awesome but yeah the sound is too soft.
Nice...
That was great for a first flash, everything was good all execept the lip-sync, that will need looking at, Apart from that it was good.