Reviews for FFVI:The Time Before P-1

[The-Storyteller]

tedious

This is as said befoe, a great start for a series. The graphics and style are too my liking, ...16-bit sprites? or 32? and the sound was nicely done, if not a bit repedetive. But a few were a bit on the downside. text speed, size of the characters in realtion to the background, maybe you could even zoom in on the background to make it more visible, and one last thing: not everyone knows the story of Final Fantasy 6, let along play it. I happen to be one of them. Maybe if you could explain it a bit more for those who have not played FFVI. Other than that, good job.

DanyLaporte responds:

Ok thx...ill follow ur advices!!

[Ribbon97]

Good start needs some work.

It looks like you have a great start for this. A couple of things though. First there were some places were the text went by to fast to read. Second check your spelling and grammer, saw several nothing big just minor goofs. Third the dialog seems a bit weak, doesn't have any flare to it. Fourth try to shrink the scenes, you are showing huge areas but that makes the characters a little to small. Can't wait to see the next installment.

DanyLaporte responds:

Ok...ive received other reviews like urs...thx alot for the advices...ill try to make my part2 10 times better...
Thx Again!

[KalassinDracon]

Needs lots more work.

So many continuity errors, even for squaresoft. First of all Terra wasn't mentally in control, hence the slave crown, she was a living doll, second Sabin was in the woods training and wouldn't have showed up with the returners -_- that's just the stuff off the top of my head. There are numerous spelling and grammar mistakes as well. I think it would go over much better if you labelled it an "alternate" beginning otherwise you're opening yourself up to alt of critism. I hope you don't think I'm being mean, I'm not trying to be but when it comes to FF3/6 I'm very picky and it looks like you didn't do your homework.
My advice would be to go back and rework alot of it.

DanyLaporte responds:

Man im doing the story a way b4 sabin train in the woods etc...

[krA]

alright...

it's good,but i'll stick to ffIII's original story...4/5

DanyLaporte responds:

Lol thx dude! :P

[Xiphon]

Not bad

Your going to want to make the people fade out when they pass through a door, like it does in most games, and make a blue box around the text or something like it does in final fantasy, and if you could (It'd take a lot of time but would look nice) make the text scroll out like it does in most games.

Another fancy trick I just learned, increase the FPS (Frames per second) of your movies. (to do it, just go into Modify and than Click document. In the window that appears, change the frame rate to something higher. 18 is pretty good, 24 works to unless you've got a lot of animation, where the program might crash. If you do this to an existing movie, the speed of everything will increase and be off-key, but you can work to fix it if you want. It's best to just do it from the start or not at all).

On a side note, stop insulting people who give you bad reviews, if they're idiots, let them be idiots. Anyone who has children knows that shouting at them doesn't usually help in the long run. Besides, you know your better than them anyway right?

keep up the work.

DanyLaporte responds:

Thx alot of the comment...Im gonna take all what uve told me in note and gonna make my second movie 10 times better :
Still thx alot for taking ur time wirting this comment :D