plot holes you could drive a truck through...
ok bud... first of all prhapez sum priff reing would help... ya know... most word processors have spell check... that would take care of one of your big problems... also ummm... yeah can you like learn a little bit about the characters' histories and personalities before using them in your cartoon. At this time Sabin would probably have still been training with Duncan, and thats just one of the problems. If Sabin and Edgar really were to have hung out at this time there would be a lot more tension between the two. please please please please go play through the game again and do better next time. Also it would look cooler if you did the dialog in the style of the game (the blue box with white text)