Reviews for FFVI:The Time Before P-1

[ScaryTom]

plot holes you could drive a truck through...

ok bud... first of all prhapez sum priff reing would help... ya know... most word processors have spell check... that would take care of one of your big problems... also ummm... yeah can you like learn a little bit about the characters' histories and personalities before using them in your cartoon. At this time Sabin would probably have still been training with Duncan, and thats just one of the problems. If Sabin and Edgar really were to have hung out at this time there would be a lot more tension between the two. please please please please go play through the game again and do better next time. Also it would look cooler if you did the dialog in the style of the game (the blue box with white text)

DanyLaporte responds:

man...this story is like alot before the game final fantasy3....Im not only gonna make 2 movies...I played like 10 times ff3...Dont worry...ull see that its gonna get some sence...

[HAcoreRD]

Looks like it squeezed through.

Pity I wasn't on, this still needs help. but i suppose third time's the charm. Whatever hope your next one(s) wont suck.

DanyLaporte responds:

....I dont think I need those kind of reviews...reviews are here to help not to say pathetic things like this....

[SewerShark]

No no no

Lots of problems there...

Firsto of all, Locke don§t even have meet Sabin befor the Tritoch incident on Narsh, Terra wasnt an imperial soldier, she was controled by a slave crown and Sabin was not a returner.

Secondo of all, the graphic was terribly bad, not only because of the sprite thing, but it was toooooooo small, my EYES were burning

DanyLaporte responds:

well ill make the second movie bigger first, and for the rest, let me do it...ull see that its gonna get sence...I have all made the story...

[happybox]

Huh?

Well, I can't give you points for graphics, because you took them from directly from another source. You need to be consistent with your subtitles. If you're going to time how long they need to be up, read them out loud. That's about how much time people need to read things on screen. Also, the grammatical and spelling errors are very bad, and make it even harder to understand the subtitles, and therefore, the story.

The story is elementary. I hope you're going somewhere with it.

DanyLaporte responds:

I make the graphics by myself first...for the rest,people already told me...thx

[Kaktus021]

needs work

Many storyline errors and text went by to fast to read. Atleast u figured out how to put sound in.

DanyLaporte responds:

ok..I already got this kind of review...