needs work
ryt, i personally think that you should have all the scenery and sprites closer to the viewer, also i think you could improve your spelling, and sprite animation, that was pretty bad, they all seemed to jerk side to side when they moved, and the transition from place to place was pretty bad eg:- the music change, needs work, the scenery, it need transition effects, k?
when you change that i'd be happy to gie you a 10! ^_^
Lol...thats a nice review....I dont think ill change it because im actually working on my part3...so I wont have many time to cahnge it...:P..
:~> Not Great
You finally managed to make this stay on the portal, didn't you? Well... ok. If other people liked it, whatever... I didn't, but that just one guy's opinion, isn't it?
But I must say... I just happened to read a few reviews and I got myself into this answer by you:
"Read others review first before writing some things that people already told me..."
That's the n00biest thing I have ever read! We don't have to read other's reviews before saying what we think! It's the extreme opposite: reviewers shouldn't be influentiated by other reviewers!!! Duh!
# Poirot #
Noobish? Im just tired of always get the same comments like ur text is too slow or check out the grammar...but whatever...You can think whatever you want..
Decent
it was decent but you need to slow down the text a bit but it was alright
yeah, In the part2 the text is slower...thx for the 9/10!
It was good...
It was good....thats it...not more....
...ok :P thx :P....
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I want to see part2!!!
Ull see it soon!
Like in 1 week!