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To the person who posited before me: It’s not boring! It’s a moving fairy tale written by Hans Christian Andersen, and I think that it was well told in the flash!
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To the person who posited before me: It’s not boring! It’s a moving fairy tale written by Hans Christian Andersen, and I think that it was well told in the flash!
((( AWSOME JOB )))
Wow dude you get really good over the time and this has to be your best work ever, i just love the artwork, and style of it all, great job i love your work...
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XwaynecoltX, it's always very nice to get review from you ! I'm more than glad that you liked my flash :D So, do I'm really getting at better ? :) your review is a good Xmas present for me ;) Have a Merry Christmas. Best wishes to California !
Man, if that wasn't pretty good...
That was a pretty good version of one of my favorite Christmas stories. But I think the biggest problem I had with it was that you added too many trivial scenes, and took away too many original ones. I mean, she never went to a church at any point during the original story, and you only showed two of the visions she saw when she lit the matches. Overall, it was good, and you retained the majority of the story in your work, but I'd recomend you compare your Flash to its source, so you get your facts straight. I'd try again next year.
Thank you very much for the review, but I don't think that my small variation of this story is wrong. I wasn't planning to follow the story word by word. Good luck !
I love the little match girl
This was my favourite story as a kid, I cried every time I read it. I think it was good, but there's much room for improvement. The grandmother's eyebrows should've been thinner, because she looked kinda like george washington. And The music was good, but I think it switched through alot more than it should've. The general mood of this story is very sad and tragic and all the happy and joyous music sort of ruined it for me.
I found your critics being useful - thanks
He's one of my favorite authors
The intro was definitely original for flash.
I thought you chose the music perfectly.
I think the graphics are a little juvenile, but it's still a lovely flash.