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he is definitely not trying to seduce Mary, listen to the lyrics.
the music is really good, but the lyrics and how they are sung are both quite sketchy and awkward.
Reviews for "Mary (Studio Recording)"
Monkeywithumbs responds:
"he is definitely not trying to seduce Mary, listen to the lyrics."
You are correct, sir! ;)
"the lyrics and how they are sung are both quite sketchy and awkward."
Yes, I agree. First of all, it is a work in progress and lastly, I can't sing :l
Good
I like the instruments, but i don't like the lyrics
Monkeywithumbs responds:
Fair enough. Thanks #653 I really appreciate your input! Oh, and I am guessing that you passed the test??
HMmm...
All I've got to ask is, are you trying to seduce Mary, or interrogate her? Because the long breaths are not helping at all for the song. Also: I thought you were going to start singing "enter sandman" :\