That was sexy
I thought it was going to be a ballad the whole way through but near the end you turned it into a more hard feeling. I agree with penguinboi that the delay near the middle didn't work too well. It just seems that there was too much at some points. Other than that I loved it. Great job!
Eureka! Maybe that's what I have been missing this whole time...it doesn't need to change so dramatically. I have never been able to get back from that middle part probably because it DOES NOT BELONG THERE! It is a cool part in and of itself, just not in this song. Even the lyrical direction changes completely at that point. Thank you both very much for that insight! (I gave the same response to Penguinboi since you both agreed about that). Thanks again!
excellent
I loved everything about this. And I thought the change in it was very well done.
5/5
10/10
Thanks for the high scores and kind words, Poo! I also like the change, but I have always had trouble going from there. Nick has given some good ideas thatjust might work. Thanks again!
Goil.
Nice work, dudes - I liked the Sudden change of Pace!
Thank you. Actually, I played everything but the drums (loops), so thanks even more!
You know, I really liked it.
Wow, this is a nice breath of fresh air. The religious undertones were something that I could take into account and enjoy because I've heard similar music before. By the way, the guitar sounds like it has some Metallica-ish elements. It really worked for the introduction of the song. The vocals were impressive; steady, sufficiently emotional, and passionate whilst at the same time not too overbearing or whingy. Definitely keep working on the song, because I'd love to see it finished.
<3
Thank you for the high praise! It is nice to hear some positive feedback sometimes, especially about my vocals...lol.
wow...
this song is amazing (and its incomplete!) theres not much i can say that the others below havent already said but its just wow.. i really hope you or someone can help you to finish this song because its too good to leave half finished in a closet like an old project a kid starts with his dad and never finished. props man.