got to agree with the others
the middle doesnt fit other then that its a great song hope you fix it and make it even better!!
Reviews for "Mary (Studio Recording)"
That was sexy
I thought it was going to be a ballad the whole way through but near the end you turned it into a more hard feeling. I agree with penguinboi that the delay near the middle didn't work too well. It just seems that there was too much at some points. Other than that I loved it. Great job!
Monkeywithumbs responds:
Eureka! Maybe that's what I have been missing this whole time...it doesn't need to change so dramatically. I have never been able to get back from that middle part probably because it DOES NOT BELONG THERE! It is a cool part in and of itself, just not in this song. Even the lyrical direction changes completely at that point. Thank you both very much for that insight! (I gave the same response to Penguinboi since you both agreed about that). Thanks again!
Sounds alot like everlast...
until it gets about halfway through...i didnt really care for the mixup in the middle...too much going on and it didnt go well with your voice i think...i think that u should keep the slow acoustic style throughout the whole piece...just my thoughts
Monkeywithumbs responds:
Eureka! Maybe that's what I have been missing this whole time...it doesn't need to change so dramatically. I have never been able to get back from that middle part probably because it DOES NOT BELONG THERE! It is a cool part in and of itself, just not in this song. Even the lyrical direction changes completely at that point. Thank you very much for that insight! I am going to give the same respond to Saxturbatio since he agreed with you about that. Thanks again!