poor stevie
get sound loops that are its smooth (ie really has no end or beginn') Also why was the rose moving so much? Was the greeting at the florist related to pube muppet who cares right. In the next show have steevie(however its spellt) Say u whore and kick the guy in the gut and stun him and he ends up rapeing teh girl and shit like that.
Well. I couldn't find any good soundloops for these events, so I just used GW to "cut" music. The rose was moving because of the wind! And YES, the greeting was related to PUBE MUPPET hehehe. I shall consider your thoughts.
Thanks for the review
Alex
Nice.
As I said before, your graphics get better by the time. Nice choice on the theme, here, aswell.
On one moment, you made the little dude run, and played a bit of music there. I don't even think that lasted two seconds. Try to avoid that in the future, it looks kind of... Well, silly. Either make the scene long enough to play the music, or leave it out.
Also, waaaay too short. Make it longer. Really.
As for the second episode, he could be down, and depressed. Eventually, maybe make it so that the girl finds out he loved her, and laughs at him for that. Then, you could bring the violence in, ex.: suicide, massacre, etc.
I'm looking forward to the second episode.
First of all, thanks for the compliments. You didn't like the part where he runs ? Oh well ... I thought it was funny lol.
I think the second episode will be much much gore and filled with violence, that's the way I want it to be hehe. But I'll let you people decide though.
Thanks for the review
Alex
Great!
Pretty good animation and a good plot too.I think this one of your best ones so far,keep up the great work!hmmm,i dont know an ending for this,fighting would ruin the plot,and taking suicide is too normal,and laughing is too unexpected and tricky the clown is just sick,hmmm,i dont have any idea!
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Thanks for the review mate. Suicide is normal ? Yeah ... I guess on these circumstances it is ! Fighting ... Hard to animate. Laughing isn't gore enough, and tricky the clown ... WHY NOT ? :)
Thanks for the review
Alex
Nice
He should go on a wild killing spree, brutally smiting all the 45 dwarves that you cant see, but who stands behind him
Wild killing spree huh ?
I'm really looking forward to make a GORE sequel. Hehehe.
Thanks for the review.
Alex
Kind of sad...
That was a good movie. The graphics were pretty good, but there was a lack of sound. That is my only complaint. I like the music at the end. And I would like to thank you, because you got me started on reviewing movies again. Thanks! As for the next episode, I don't really know. A shooting rampage? A fight scene? Maybe suicide? But all of those are violent, maybe something more subtle.
Well, first of all, thanks for all the compliments. Lack of sound? Well, I did my best, and I didn't want it to be too big either. Well, I'm glad I got you into reviewing again!
Thanks for the review, I will read all my reviews until a certain date, and I shall decide what is the better solution, I think it will be a little bit ... more ...GORE !!! :)
No subtile ! :P
Alex