Ehh.......its okay I guess.
There are only so many ways for the main charcter to deal with this. I say kill the guy she was with or get a hooker.
Reviews for "lll_Deception Part 1_lll"
alexsmolik responds:
Get a hooker ? Fun.
I will consider your proposition.
Thanks for the review and the compliment.
Alex
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Stevie will kill the boy and then the girl will love him. ^_^
The graphics could be better at some point, for example when he runs with the rose. For the rest everything is ok.
alexsmolik responds:
Thanks for the compliments. I know I could have made the graphics a bit better from time to time... But you know how lazyness is... It's a horrible thing. I don't want it to be a happy ending lol. It will be gore. I think, even though, I will consider your proposition among with the others.
Thank for the review.
I think
Stevie should tell that chick to suck his dork. and if she doesnt he will slap her. and then he should slap her 80 times then go to jail.
alexsmolik responds:
I don't think Steevie would have the guts to kick another guy's nuts. He is a pretty fragile boy you know. I will consider what you said though.
Thanks for the review.
Alex
What to do?
I think maybe Stevie gets the girl and then finds out something like she eats grapefruit. Stevies family is rich and powerful, and is trying to rid the world of grapefruit-eaters. Then the episode can end with another 'What should Stevie do?'
alexsmolik responds:
Are you suggesting a part III ? ;)
I will consider your advice/thought with the others and will see what I will do ... Expect some GORE stuff. I think.
Thanks for the review.
Alex
hmm...
The boy goes home and kills himself
alexsmolik responds:
Blood blood blood.
That's what the next episode will be about I think. GORE.
Thanks for the review.
Alex