Reviews for lll_Deception Part 1_lll

[Butterz]

it matters.....

if your going for a blood and guts thing, you should have him use the rose as a dart and make it go through both their sculls. if your going for a lovey, sad story, you should have him drop the rose and have the pupile of his eyes shrink, and have him walk off and it start raining, then have him in the street and a car about to hit him cause it can't see through the rain; it hits him and a girl comes out and finds out he is allright and they stare into each others eyes... and you take it from there.

alexsmolik responds:

lol, thanks for the proposition of what could possibly be the next episode of Deception. I'm looking for something with blood and guts indeedy... I'll see ...
Thanks for the review.
Alex

[Jossos]

Do you really want to know?

I say kill off the guy, and bitchslap the girl till she comes back to him

<3 Alex :P

alexsmolik responds:

Yes I really want to know! =P
I will take care of what you think may be the next part, among with what the others have said. When I get to 30-35 reviews, I'll stop taking care of what people will say, and I will decide what I could possibly do. Too bad that it sucks being at school again!!!
Thanks for the review <3
Alex

[DeathManofDoom4]

Good

in the next episode have him goto a gym and train, and then make him approach the two, and have him go super saiyan and kill them. Or make him be standing there watching them, when suddenly he has sunglasses, a leather jacket and 2 uzi's. then have him blast at them with the uzis doing the matrix

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks for proposing something, I'll analyze it with the rest of the comments and propositions, and I'll decide what I could possibly do to make all of you happy for the sequel !:) I really like the UZI idea ... Actually I might ... You gave me an idea lol. Uzi reminds me of something.
Thanks for the review.
Alex

[XwaynecoltX]

((( DECENT )))

Hey notbad, what i say should happen next is, he starts tearing, but thens gets pissed, breaks flower in half, and buys a big gun and makes a big bed of blood of the two, to only findout that, that was not even the girl she was late to the park, but its too late cause he is taken away to jail, where in the next episode big bubba awaits his cell mate ha, now that should be great, hope i helped, nice fun facts at the end...

~X~

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks for the compliment. I will consider your proposition for the sequel, and I am indeedy thinking of adding loads of blood for the next episode lol. Haha, big bubba... So many propositions... I'll see, I'll see...
Thanks for the review.
Alex

[NFLblitze1]

Not bad

I Actually enjoyed it....only the ending was too short...it went by to quick...you should have stretched it out longer or made him cry or somthing....but i like your style....and the graphics were pretty good...i agree with j00bie don't ever use the titanic theme song..lol...good job..

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks for the compliments. I know the end was too short ... At first, I thought I'd make a close-up on his face, and show a tear falling. I like the Titanic theme song ! :)
Thanks for the review.
Alex