he should...
He should make the flash longer.. heh
Reviews for "lll_Deception Part 1_lll"
alexsmolik responds:
Yes he should, but unfortunately, he was lazy and didn't want to carry on.
Thanks for the review
Alex
We have got a few approaches here...
1. The boy picks up a plazma rifle or anything simialr and shoots the girl and the other boy. Then he takes suicide (or goes on a killing spree) make it a simple game if so.
2. He simply dream section 1 and you make it so the audience thinks that this really happens, then you switch back to real life.
3. He runs away crying and goes home to eat A LOT of chocolate, so much that he bursts into pieces.
4. He says "oh well" and demand the money back for the rose. He then go home and let life go on (Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooring)
5. He walks up to them and says something like "Oh hey, I just spotted you from afar and thought I should say hi" and then the girl finds him super secksay and pushes the other one away and they go home and make wild love in the shower.
6. The boy picks up a harmonica and starts to play the blues.
7. He goes on a mad exercise program to look really hawt and to improve his looks. Then he confronts the girl and they talk and stuff and get together. Then we need a motto like: "Excercinig isn't only healthy, it grants you bitches too!" Or something..
Want more, or shall i stop now? I have a lot more.
alexsmolik responds:
Wow !
You wrote me a whole essay there hehe. So many ideas for such a small piece of flash... I wouldn't have thought so! Well, thanks for all the ideas, I shall consider them. I'm thinking of making the sequel a bit more "gore". I'll see. I like the idea game ! Sounds interesting !
Thanks for the review.
Alex
Touching
Well, in a way it is, anyway. The overall plot idea is pretty good. The artwork and animation are excellent. It is evident that you put a lot of time into making this movie. The music selection was good as well. One thing that could've improved this movie would be a good voice track, although it was okay just the same. Probably could've made it a bit longer as well. Hopefully part II turns out as well as this one did. Good work.
alexsmolik responds:
Thanks a lot for the nice review and the cool compliments dude. I did put a lot of time into it for sure. Finally, more than one day! A good voice track? Bleh, I was too tired to do that one. A bit longer ? Well of course, I could have made it like 600-700 kb, but I was kind of lazy and I didn't felt like it, so I decided to let you people decide what will happen in the next episode that, like you guys, hope will be cool too !
Thanks for the review !
Alex
This is a...
...cool movie! Your graphics are still crappy, lol j/k.
The story is good and i think it can be continued like this: after the kiss she sees the guy and feels a bit confuse about who she likes best. In meanwhile the guy with the rose runs away craying and he wants to jump of a bridge.
I think this could make a good Ep 2. Just an opinion.
I see you know how to use movie clips. That's cool man! Keep improving! ;)
alexsmolik responds:
Hehe yeah! I got the hang on MovieClips a lot! I used them so much and now I feel like a god lol. Thanks for the compliments by the way.
And oh, I shall consider your request, among with all the others, and I will decide what will come up next ... It will be GORE ! Hehehe.
Thanks for the review!
Alex
Next episode
it was real good and in next episode let him beat the shit out of this guy ;)
alexsmolik responds:
Thanks for the compliments! Hehe, I shall consider your request.
Thanks for the review.
Alex