Nice try
Needs some work...needs voices...needs music...and it bugged me how it kept looping...but like I said, nice try. Keep at it, pal.
Reviews for "The Toon With No Name!"
underscore responds:
thanx
meh
i tohught not bad, not good. it looked like you started strong but got bored of making it towards the end so wrapped it up a bit sloppily or something. like you droawing style kinda though. better luck next time mate.
Looks good but man
It looked really good, but you really need to put some sound in. And learn how to spell special.
to make it in the world, you need some sound
no music no sfx no fun.... is there a pattern? hmm
even though you may have not found any sound that blended well with it, try something anyway... the way i feel? you can have silly sound effects, which would add to the humor....
for example: at the dayam them all part... im sure u can pick out something there, especially since it occurs more than once- and when the die smacks the blonde
so pick out some classics like HomeStarRunner yeah
Hum ... Yeah
Need improvements. Like adding sound
underscore responds:
yeah i do see your point, sorry i will be getting a mic. soon so there wont b any bubbles 2