What is this?
this may not be the worst out there but it has been found wanting and needs to be put out of its misery.
Reviews for "The Toon With No Name!"
underscore responds:
well its hanging on to every last drop of life, now down to 0.98 score!
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It is ironic that you're 16, and you conduct yourself in that manner. I will be honest, I know jack shit about flash animated movies, I only use it for my website. I'm sure it is hard to complete forty seconds of a movie, but you need to work more on it. You submitted this movie knowing it wouldn't do good at all, yet you bash every negative review. It's the same as going into a rape hospital, and singing 'rape me'. I see it as either a want to bitch at someone, or testing what NG viewers like to see. Either way, you can't lash out on people who bash your work. Yes, more then ninety percent of the people who say "someone's work sucks" have never opened a flash program, but you got to live with the fact of 'Supply and demand' of the movie realm and learn to take negative criticism.
underscore responds:
Woah! I dont mind people saying they dont like it but most of thease guys are going over the top or are just here ofr the review points! also more than half picked on my spelling and that pees me off because its not my fault, also if its SO crap and horrible how come its still here? why hasent it been blamed? sone one please tell me what this so called peice of shit is still here come on!?
Fine, I'll be original
lets see what I can pick on besides spelling. Well, no sound or music of any kind. Not a praticularily bad thing for a game but doesn't do much justice for a movie.
Then I suppose there's the automatic dialogue boxes... it's better to make buttons to let the user manually move from scene to scene when there's no audio... it's not hard to do... I forget what it is but you basically make a button and then put something like Next.scene in its actionscript or something.
Also, add a plot, or a storyline, or a joke, or anything that will make this flash, interesting/funny/worth the energy it takes to click on "Play this Movie". If you're not the type of person who's good at that but still want to make flashes, you can look for some rant or story on the internet and make a flash of that as a tribute (don't forget to mention the author).
Sorry this review is so long. BTW, the animation was all right.
underscore responds:
thanx i'll keep that in mind, i'm hopeing to get a friend of mine to write the storys for my cartoons soon
...crap
D&D sucks king crazy balls and so does ur movie..why..why mee??? why pain us with ur junk
meh
the good:
it was somewhat funny.
the bad:
bad spelling, nos sound, no music.
the ugly:
put at least some background music in your flashes... and learn how to spell.