I Can't say it didn't deserve turd of the week...
...although it had the bare foundations of a funny cartoon (eg. "Damn them all").
If you added more animation, maybe some sounds and a better story, you could be on to something.
Reviews for "The Toon With No Name!"
underscore responds:
thanx i see what ur saying, i'm gonna completly remake it soon and make it all about a bunch of characters that have been blamed, that should make it funny
Well, it has potential...
Needs work though...Lotsa work...
underscore responds:
LOL yeah i see your point!
Kinda sucks massive ballz
ok, i dont like blamming movies on NG because i respect everyones work they add on NG. but this could have been much better. u could add music, add sound effects and give it some logical story.
but i agree with the autor a bit, like 50% of the people that have blammed this movie dont even know how to make a flash movie so they should just stfu. Thank u! ^^
underscore responds:
WELL SAID! Ok you didnt realy like the toon and all but thank you for that last part! sorry its not that good I have started work on a new version of this toon that follows the life of a group of blamed toons
work especially on the text.
hey there, this is my first real review! But back to basics:
- I really didn't think the graphics were that bad, but maybe you should put a little more motion in it.
- can't really judge about the music, so I didn't rate that
- work on the typing. You already said you saw te mistakes when it was too late, though, be more careful when you check them. It might just be personal taste, but I think that if you type text, it should be prober english (or whatsoever language you write it in). And when you use that much text, make the speechbubbles last longer.
- I didn't really know what it was about...
whoa..
Ok, my personal opinion i did not like your movie. now im going to give the reasons...
1. No sound, personaly i just find sound far better in a flash movie
2. The story wasn't that great.
3. And finaly the whole looping thing was terrible.
Now im just giving you my opinions about ur flash movie, and chances are i will never post a flash so i dont got much room to talk. However i had to let you know how an "Average NG Surfer" feels about it.
Its not personal, just helpful opinions =)