Improoving required
Better graphics, little more moving around, better voice acting, (you said it yourself it was badly done) and maybe something a little more interesting then what you already got. It's pretty crappy but has potential to be good.
Reviews for "NG Army: Recruitment"
Vaslious responds:
yeah it was a bit quick and plain. i'll be taking my time on future animations though. I more or less spent a week on this. (mostly drawing for this flash and the next)
Not bad, but a little confusing
im sorry, but that just didnt make much sense to me...maybe its because i couldnt hear the audio too well or something but other than that it was ok. It really didnt have a point but im sure the next episode will be good
Vaslious responds:
I will be including captions on the next movie. Thanks for the review, it helps.
needs some work
and why did you show strawberry_clock i know he's not in the NG army
Vaslious responds:
I showed Strawberry, pm, and Foamy not cuz they'll in the Army but cuz they are is flashes that come out of the Portal all the time. Just keepin it real.
Hmmm...
Improvements in that it needed a preloader. It wsn't really a game or a movie, was it?
Vaslious responds:
The preloader ended up not quite working the way it was supposed to.
Listen
Thank you for saying my name..I was expecting to see our characters and everything,but hey its a good recruitment flash and hopefully we'll get some new members in this crew..The graphics and voices were good..Next time make it longer!!!Overall its a good flash for a first timer. I gave you my protection vote,bro.Happy Holidays!!
Vaslious responds:
All of the characters for the other flash are still in production. This ended up being like a prequel to the next flash which your guy is in. That flash will be much longer. Thanks for the review.