DUDE
this is pro man. nice, clean and simple. i can see this being used in some game like jak and daxter or maybe even kingdom hearts or just some game in general dude... hell this sounds like somthin that could even be used in an anime like death note or somthing where there is a lot of explaining or discovery. Keep up the great work and get a job in music production man... youll be famous for it. real pro man...
peace!!!