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Okay, I figure that you wanna show long shots and all, and that you wanna be like Kishlovski or Kubrick, but it just ain't working. When Kubrick filmed a man sleeping for full 6 hours, he had a point behind it. You...you just show a man beating a dead horse. I mean...come on... get a meaning behind it, and MAYBE it can get a 3, MAX.
You obviously got a lot of talent, so why do you waste it?