Could be better.
Fix the audio and the animation, other than that it would be good.
Author Comments
Yes yes, i know. Before i say anything, constructive criticism please, dont just say you suck balls. I know i suck balls, i dont need you to tell me. There WILL be a part 2, however if you flame me constantly, i wont be inclined to put ANY effort into it as opposed to the oodles of effort i put into this one. Part 2 will be the intense cleverly animated battle scenes with guns, gore, violence, cursing, and gay jokes.
Since many of my reviews seem to revolve around you fucking suck i hope you die or something of the ilk, ive decide to not only continue making me movies but to make Pt. 2 anyway just to piss you off. In addition id like to say that i have had sex with each and everyone of of your girlfriends/wives, the people i'm talking to know who they are. They were great but you wouldnt know as i know for a fact they dont let you touch them. Good day.
A bit bad, no offense.
Don't mean to offend you, but it really isn't that great.
Graphics: You should try practicing with flash a bit more, get in the hang of it.
Style: This is off. I don't understand the beginning at all.
Sound: I understand you have a shitty, craptacular mic and recorder, so do I. Therefore, I'm giving mercy on this.
Violence: Not that much violence. Should work on some of that, it's what pumps the teenage blood.
Interactivity: This isn't a game, obviously. This isn't going against the overall.
Humor: Some were funny, and some were just plain gay. Try figuring out more good jokes.
BTW, before you go cussing your ass of at me and going all "WAI DONT U MAKE A MOOVIE AND I JUDGE", I'm only being a hard critic so you can identify your mistakes and improve them. If you were to make a sequel, and sharpened up this before you started making it, it would be getting more 7-8s instead of 0-5s.
((( ENTERTAINING )))
~~REVIEW~~
Haha well i did find this somewhat entertaining, the artwork and backrounds could use more effort such and shading and detail, aswell as some smoother animation, i like the idea, and could be much better, hope to see more sometime...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort on the art, and better animation...
~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining, but could use more effort...
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Ok...
Well....I like the idea....but the graphics aren't very good....I did like the bullet though.....
very good
i liked yor little metal gear solid parody
Keep up the good work