Interesting concept, but the art doesn't reflect the perfection of the story being told. It is a great beginning, but you have to work on your physical representation of the story.
I agree with you. The video started out as a simple story-boarded scene not meant for a trailer. When I realized what I wanted, I had come too far to go back and simply did the best I could with what I had.
So I'll be sure to work on that for the next video I make. Visuals and content will represent the story better.
Thanks for the input!
thAT ANIMATION THO
Gracias! It was a blast to make!
Wow. I'm not speechless but almost feel like it. I think I'm in love with this. :)
The art is breahtaking, the sounds, sampled, recorded, created, and however you may or may not have acquired and used them, as well as the music used therein, all come together for an amazing work of art. It was coming off as a stereotypical cookie-cutter sort of action cartoon, but then revealed its self to be so much more. A dramatic story-driven animation that just may have elements of psychological elements. I'm prepared for more, although it will undoubtedly take some time. And that photo at the end? Wow. Certainly a meticulously portrayed likeness. Your skills as an artist are by all means profound.If I had a fraction of this ability, I would be skyrocketing above the levels of content.
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to forgetting about this after a month or two, and then coming across it again later on and being mindblown. lol
Once again, I appreciate the in-depth review.
And I'm sorry to disappoint, but ATM I have no plans to make more of "Crestfallen" videos (although I WANT to!). I have other projects planned though.
Make it happen.
I will do my best.
Have a good one!
This is just... beautiful! the animation looks great, especially the way you play around with the camera. the plot seems interesting. the sfx and voice acting is good, too. i'm really looking forward to tthe next video after this. Take your time though. We don't want to see a crappy video after you've hyped us this much. For now, i think i'll go watch "The Overseer" hehe good luck!
Well, I might do more projects soon unrelated to this one. We'll see. Animation is a long process so I have to pick and choose what I do carefully.
Hope you enjoy! It's a bit simple, but hopefully it's worth your time!