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I created this film completely in Flash...

However I apologise for the quality and the file size, when I went to put this together two shots had become corrupt and so I had to upload the uncompressed mov into Flash.

Please visit my YouTube for more films ( http://www.youtube.com/user/BlatantlyObviousMan )

Special thanks to hania Lee for her music, ( http://hania.newgrounds.com/ )

James Lee for his assistance through the project ( http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/509092 )

and David Williams for designing the sound. ( http://doyvid.newgrounds.com/ )

Special thanks also to Eric Gusky and Mike Pollock for their voice acting. ( http://www.voices.com/login )

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I say:
2 for art
3 story
2 comedy
3 voices
10/10 :) \/ GREAT JOB!

Some obvious Invader Zim influences here. Excellent animation (pixelation aside), the story is clever and flows well (until the abrupt ending), but what really shines here is the voice acting (again, until the ending).

2 for the art!
2 for being a good comedy!
1 for the voices!

I wrote some worthless gaff here originally but to summarise this be good yo

This hits almost all the right notes, but comes short of the ultimate sweet spot. The animation, music, and voice acting are top-notch, truly. The story and pacing is where it comes up short. It starts off quite interesting, but comes to an unsatisfactory conclusion too quickly. I wish it had been a bit longer, with a different ending. 4.5 stars, though - a really great animation.

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4.75 / 5.00

Jul 6, 2010
12:11 AM EDT
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