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A dark and disturbing tale...

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Nifty

I suppose in was eerie and disturbing like you said, so I'll give you a 5 out of 10.

pretty neat

Although a strange use of my song :D

Nicholas-Deary responds:

lol, were you expecting a animation about a quaint little waterfall or something?

O.K.

the stlye is pretty good but it needs to be longer and have some sort of easily recognisible plot but i agree with trekopep, it has potential

Eh.

Has the potential to be good, but there are quite a few things you should improve on.

First of all, it needs to be way longer. What you have now sort of explains the storyline, but you need to add characters, perhaps voices, and more action. There needs to be more animated scenes, not just a few tweened and blurred pictures with a few animations thrown in.

You might want to add music, too. You should add sound effects, although music might not be as good as just background noise like you had. Other than those things, it was okay, but there isn't enough.

Random..

Yes, it was disturbing, and the use of live action mixed with animation was good..but there was nothing to it, and no real story. Please add some sort of background story.

Nicholas-Deary responds:

There was no live action, it was all just pictures.

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Mar 20, 2008
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