R-random

Lol, that was random!

Keep Trying...

Ths sound was off, but you did tell us of that. I can see the work you put into it, but more of an effort wouldn't kill ya either. Your animation good use more work and please if you make another one, make it longer. Other than that it was okay, you just have a nice bit of room to improve.

|| Good Points ||
*It was okay

|| Bad Points ||
*Too short
*Animation needs work
*Sound needs work

Hm.

Not the best, but not bad. The animation is okay, but it's too short. I can tell you worked hard on it, but make your next movie a little longer. :]

I liked it

To tell you the truth that wasn't bad at all. Sure I've seen beter, but I've also seen alot worse as well. Although it's really short and has no sound the animation makes up for it. It definatly deserves more than it's current score, I'll give you a 3/5 and 6/10. It's not perfect but if you put more effort (and a little music) into your next flash I'm sure it'll turn out fine. Very good job...

not bad at all

Better than my first submission anyways haha, enjoyed watching it, good song too - haven't heard it in a while.
Good work and keep practicing.