I agree with the user below, this IS HIGHLY underrated. How this has a score below a 4 is beyond me. This was superb. I'm not one to complain that much about the animation, but I thought it was really good. Certainly nothing on the level of some stuff you see in the top 50 of all time on Newgrounds, but it was really good and I had no problems with it. But the thing that sold it for me was the patience you had with the storytelling. You didn't just jump right into some pointless battles like I'm sure many people would have preferred; you took care to setup the world, the storyline and the characters, and this made this a much more fascinating piece of work, and certainly more fun to watch as I was engaged in what was going on. I'm a sucker for these sort of things on Newgrounds when people actually take time to develop an interesting story instead of short clips of senseless violence or unfunny comedy shorts. Your directing was great, the visuals and composition was were all great. So good job man, I only wish you've done more on Newgrounds that I could see.
If I had only one complaint, it would have to be your selection of music during the fight scenes. Maybe you were going for a Quentin Tarantino feel with that, but since that music is so overused in many things, it kind of ruined the feel a bit. But that's just a minor gripe.
But again, good job.