very cool
the animation was soo good....i loved the weapons they used.....you are some kind of flash man genious......i have to see more
Reviews for "Dual Arms: Precipice"
RPGsrok responds:
Well, thanks. There is another animation I've submitted which has worse animation but it's the closest you'll get to "seeing more" right now. If you have the time, please PM me; I need to decide what my next project will be, and I'll tell you what I've been considering. Thanks for reviewing!
GJ that was worth it, deffinatly.
Seems like you spent the time to do this well, and efficiently, good job 10/10 for that.
There's nothing wrong with anime, sorry to say but besides the fact it's well done, you don't really do anime drawings very well. Besides that it's very well done.
RPGsrok responds:
I have a vague idea of what you mean by not doing anime drawings well. I assume you refer to the actual animation - that I can attempt to spend more time on. If you mean the actual character designs, thats a bit harder to fix. I know my character animation is choppy at times (i worked at 18 fps) but my character designs are purely an artistic thing that I need to improve simply by drawing a lot over a long time. Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I encourage you to help me decide which of the projects I'm considering now to do (PM me). Thanks again!
Lots of Talent
Little things like the art, and a few moment of dialouge are off, but that can come with practice. You have a great sense of dramatic timing, artistic layout and storyline. It's very good for your second flash and the story is has amazing potentential.
RPGsrok responds:
I'd like to know what SPECIFICALLY I can fix about the art, but I have a few things I know I can work on. As for lip syncing, this was really the first time I did so much, so a lot came out badly. Its not easy! But I'm sure I can improve with practice, as you said. If you'd like me to continue this story I encourage you to PM me saying so (as opposed to starting a new series). Thanks again!
Damn that was good.
I mean for only your second flash video that was good. Although the audio seems to need a little improvement. Keep up the good work man!
RPGsrok responds:
Thanks for reviewing. I know how to fix some of the audio problems (I assume you refer to the voice acting) and will certainly improve on my next work. Speaking of which, if you have the time, please PM me if you want to help me decide what said next work will be (I have some ideas, don't know what to do). My third flash won't come for a while yet of course, but I hope you'll look forward to it.
nice
First, the movie was great, second IT WAS IN JAPENESE! :P 5 and 10 from me
RPGsrok responds:
Glad you liked it! I admit the Japanese was good at times (the title I translated myself, the reservoir stuff was shamelessly pulled from a dictionary) Please PM me if you want to help me decide on my next project. Thanks again!